Underneath the deep blue sea, anxiously sitting on the rock, Marlin grouched. Slowly swimming up to Marlin, Dory happily tried to cheer him up. Hey Mr Grumpy Gills, When life gets you down you know what you gotta do? Dory giggled, “Come on what are you scared of?”
“I don’t want to know what you gotta do.” Mumbled Marlin sadly
Dory grabbed Marlin by the fin and slowly dragged him down to the dark depth ocean
“Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming, swimming. “ sang Dory
“Dory please enough, no more singing. See now that song is stuck in my head”.
3 comments:
Hi Studamayer I love this paragraph,although you might want to look back at your writing there is a few mistakes. Overall I loved your paragraphs Keep it up!
HI Studamyer I love your writing, I think you have missed some speech marks on your paragraph. But I really like your writing so keep up the good work.
By Max
Hi Studamyer it Shanika I love your writing and paragraph but look back at your writing there is a few mistakes.
By Shanika
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