40 minute writing

This morning we had 40 minutes to write about anything we wanted. From this we are going to set some writing goals for the term. Here is what I wrote.

Holidays.

Going to the pools I was excited to swim with my nephews. Looking through the glass window I saw my friend Brent. Waving and waving he begged for me to hop in. A few minutes later I walked through wet slopy water. Splash, in I went. “do you want a race” said brent, ummmm ok.On the countdown of 3 we swam from side to side. “yeah I bet you” replied brent.

My Sons Naughty

Neo maths from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.


Jack and Ray were at the rugby. Ray’s team was winning
so Jack decided to give Ray a problem to deflate his ego a
bit. So Jack said “Did you know that today is my three
sons’ birthday?” “How old are they?” Ray asked taking
the bite. “I’ll give you a hint. The product of their ages is
36 and the sum of their ages is 13,” Jack replied. “That’s
no help,” said Ray. So Jack weakened and gave him
another clue. “O.K. My youngest son is very naughty.”
“Nothing to it,” exclaimed Ray and he told Jack the
correct ages of his sons.

Restauarant Questions

My Project 23 from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

The Pizza Place in my town has three tables of the same size. The Chicken N Chips restaurant has four of the same sort of table.

The Chicken N Chips can just seat 24 people. How many people can The Pizza Place seat?

Now a third of the seats at The Chicken N Chips were empty and a half of the places at The Pizza Place were empty. If 18 more people wanted to eat out, how many would have to be turned away from the two restaurants?

Movie Reflection

I think max's movie was great because they were good at acting and they timed there singing and also there camera shots. I really liked there details they put into there movie, they didn't trace any of there backgrounds. I also liked there animation it was realistic, none of them were complex. The scenes flowed well with each other.

Storyboard Planing

Establishing Shot - 3 seconds Wide - long shot	Once there lived 3 hobbits. Fa: Shayne Tee: Studz Foi: Heremaia
Title
close up - 3 secondes of them separating	Too old to live with mum so they go their separate ways.	Studz goes left, Heremaia goes straight and Shayne goes right.
wide shot - 2 seconds of all three separating	Too old to live with mum so they go their separate ways.	Studz goes left, Heremaia goes straight and Shayne goes right.
Long Shot - 3 seconds of the oldest hobbit going to Pak n save	They have never left the cottage ever
Title In the bushes
Close Up - 2 seconds of Going into bush
Above shot - 2 seconds of trying to trap animals.	the twisted tail

Studamyer Prospective Student

Struggling up a vertical mountain the boy slipped and left dangling with one arm. Gripping on the ledge he pulled himself up and continued climbing up the rocky mountain feeling exhausted. The boy was determined to reach his destination.

Arriving at the dojo gates he was nervous hoping to be accepted for the MMA. Anxiously knocking on the door the boy heard a squeak as the door open. As the sansei approached the door the boy bowed with fear.

The good looking sansei came out and pointed to the side and shut the door. Sitting down Matt meditated for all night and day. Feeling hopeful the boy did not know that the sensei came back in the morning. Again the sensei pointed to the side of the dojo and shut the door. The boy felt angry and kick the door down and demanded a fight. Then the sensei pointed to the side and then the student saw the sign and felt embarrassed

The Big Bad Pig

The Big Bad Pig  

Once there lived three little joyful wolves in a farm by a roaring waterfall. Everyday the little wolves would play in their backyard and watched the airplanes fly above their head. Across the waterfall lived the meanest pig. He was bad, mean, and terrible. He hated the three little wolves.

One day the mean pig cross the river and tried to catch the wolves. He stomped his way to the first little wolf’s house. It was made out of hay .”I will stomp and jump and knock your house down” Said the pig Not on the hairs on my chiny chin chin” said the smallest wolf. So the big mean pig stomped and jumped and knocked his house down. The smallest pig ran off to the second oldest wolves house. His house was made out of brick. “Come out come out little wolfs” Or I will stomp and jump and knock your house down”. “ Not on the hairs on my chiny chin chin” Said the too young wolfs.

So the pig stomped & jumped and knocked the second wolf’s house down. The two wolfs scattered off to the oldest wolfs house. The mean old pig chased the pigs. The two younger pigs ran into the big brother house it was made of steel. “Little wolf’s  little wolf's please come out”. Said the Pig “ Not on the hairs on my chiny chin chin”  said the the wolf’s. ”I will stomp and jump and knock your house down”.

So the pig stomped and jumped and did not knocked the house down. So the pig climbed to the top of the house and tried to get through by the chimney. The pig fell through the chimney and dropped into a hot boiling pot. After all the 3 joyful wolfs lived happily ever after and had pork for dinner.